Re-upload of Champter 9, “Woe” is complete.
Not much to say about this one. As you may pick up, I was quite morose while writing this one. But I tried to work some degree of warmth to it.
There were some elements that I added in the past that I deeply regret. Dogot has become a controversial character to me. I largely can’t stand him anymore. I added so many comedic relief characters with no regard for it they were actually funny. I find that he isn’t. However, I greatly loved having him interact with Ocura in that one scene.
My favorite scene would have to be Ayabegei in her lab as the ship flies about it.