The updated Chapter 04 is complete.
The first handful of chapters are going to take the longest. I see that. This one, for as short as it was, took a long time to apply retcons. My identity of factions was deplorable. But I am working to cut some of that down. One of my big sins is repetition. Don’t think I too haven’t noticed.
The Mabun Embarrassment is often reiterated. And so too are the parameters of the Ultra-Verse. On some level, I think I do this specifically for me, as I often have to remind myself about these when writing. I will make an effort to cut it down in the future. Too much exposition nukes interest.
I hope you enjoy.
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